2021年6月真题（第一套）
Changes in the Way of Education.
(1) 描述题目，观点表达
描述题目：
随着疫情的来临，人们开始居家隔离，网络教育变得流行，有人认为这样挺好，有人认为这样不好。
come epidemic（流行病） situation（情况）
separate education online popular
suppose good think so
begin doing sth是指开始做某事，表示动作正在进行。
begin to do sth是开始打算要做某事，是指事情还未做，准备开始做。
观点表达：
我觉着网络教育是好的。
be beneficial to
合并：
关于时态：我选用一般现在时还是一般过去时，我感觉可以选用一般现在时，现在情况依然存在。
With epidemic situation coming,people are separated and stay home.Online education become popular.Some people suppose that it broungt positive influence.But others don't think so.I think online education is beneficial to us.
（2）论证1，细化论证1，论证2，细化论证2
论证1：
ps：这里应该是举一个网络教育的积极作用。
我们可以更加有效的学习。
efficiency efficient
We are able to learn efficiently.
细化论证1：在线下的时候，如果听不懂，也不可以听第二遍了，而网络学习视频可以让你找到适合自己的节奏，对于不会的东西，可以通过反复观看来学习。
Listen class online study videos see again and again
It is adj for sb to do sth.
It is difficult for us to listen again if we can't understand the content which the teacher said.
But we can solve the problem easily if we learn online teaching videos,because we can see the videos again and again.
论证2：
我们可以开阔自己的眼界。
Online education can broaden our horizons.
细化论证2：
我们可以接触到很多更优质的来自最好的学校的在线课程。我们可以知道这样的学校会如何教学生以及教学生哪些重要的东西。
look better online class
how the teacher teaches students
teach what is important thing.
合并：
We will look many online classes which are from best school and know how the teacher teaches students and that the teacher think what is the most important for students.
（3）总结前文，照应观点
总结前文：
？
该怎么总结呢？
例如：
从另一篇文章中抄过来的：
From the example above,we can see clearly the importance of actions which help to make a difference in history.
但上面的论述是通过举例子完成的。
所以是通过例子可以看出。
又一篇文章是这么写的：
For reasons above（承接上文),it's high time that young students realized the value of school.
上面写的是理由，所以是通过理由可以看出。
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从上面的理由可以看出，网络教育的发展带来了很积极的影响。
it is easy to know that development of online education brings very positive influence from above reasons.
照应观点：
我们应该积极拥抱变化，并且好好享受网络教育带给我们的好处。
we ought to receive changes and enjoy well the benefit which online education brings.
合并：
With epidemic situation coming,people are separated and stay home.Online education become popular.Some people suppose that it broungt positive influence.But others don't think so.I think online education is beneficial to us.
The reasons are followed.First of all,We are able to learn efficiently.It is difficult for us to listen again if we can't understand the content which the teacher said.But we can solve the problem easily if we learn online teaching videos,because we can see the videos again and again.Besides,Online education can broaden our horizons. We will look many online classes which are from best school and know how the teacher teaches students and that the teacher think what is the most important for students.
It is easy to know that development of online education brings very positive influence from above reasons. we ought to receive changes and enjoy well the benefit which online education brings.
如果想要再精进的话，应该需要去学习一些相对高级一点的词汇，然后把整体结构继续打牢。
可以学习人家的范文。
